I know I'm spamming you with comments again, and I wasn't going to... but I was half-way through one on FF.net and I wanted to quote a line, but I don't like quoting on FF.net because people often look at the reviews before they read the story, so it feels 'spoilery'. 'So, don't tell me off', is where I was going with that!
Anyway, the line I wanted to quote, is the repeated phrase at the end of your antepenultimate paragraph:
'I can't bear it, I can't bear it.'
That just brings a lump to my throat every time. And my throat is not easily rendered lumpy.
Gorgeous work, my dear. My cudgel is proud - as am I :D
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Date: 5 November 2012 20:57 (UTC)Anyway, the line I wanted to quote, is the repeated phrase at the end of your antepenultimate paragraph:
'I can't bear it, I can't bear it.'
That just brings a lump to my throat every time. And my throat is not easily rendered lumpy.
Gorgeous work, my dear. My cudgel is proud - as am I :D