http://chocolamousse.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] chocolamousse.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] chocolamousse 2012-11-04 06:38 pm (UTC)

Small and perfect and lovely.
Yes, I love John too. Oh, you mean... Sorry. :D

I loved how it wasn't obvious at the beginning
I'd love to say, "Yes, am I not super-clever?", but I can't! It's only at the very last moment that I had the idea of revealing only at the end of the fic that John doesn't know Sherlock is here, then I realised that all I had wrote could make the reader think that he was in John's bed (er, I mean that Sherlock was in John's bed, not the reader, unfortunately!), and his lover already.

Anyway, thank you very much for your very kind words. I'll post another story tomorrow, I hope you'll like it too!

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